Dalliance

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As Saffie says, the imagery conjured here is marvellous because of the quantity and quality of descriptive language.

a hypersonic cyclone
rests on the gulf
of casualness,
smirking at a
potpourri afterthought.

^^

Love this, by the way.

Take care, Hannah

I adore how you mix these dances with nature and love together. It is a very rare thing to see in poetry.

The imagery is clear because you pick such descriptive words and I can imagine the dance picking up pace as the flow of the poem becomes faster.

Another great job Hannah, seems like you done well on the challenge!