Farewell to Melesa Cole

A meaningful piece with a powerful message. People can get to a part of life with no return others are stronger, we can't know how strong we are until we reach that point.

Em

This poem is really sad. I am not sure how to even begin to comment on this without it coming out depressing. :(

Powerful poem, the girl loved her parents so much that when they died she lost her reason to live, she got stuck with depression and can no longer feel happiness, she was sick of living a life of pain so she decided to just end her life to end all the hurt shes feeling inside.. sad story

I understand the poem I've been to that point in my life but I didn't lose my parents I lost my love she died and I was dead inside I just didn't want to deal with the freaking pain anymore I looked at the knife always I never cutted anymore though I'm sure it would've freaking helped with the emotional pain but I didn't and anyways I know the pain in the poem good job and I know that there is hope in the world may not seem like it at times but it's true there is hope :)

Onyx

Sad poem i like gets you from the start then hits deep at the end 5\5 :(