A perfect life

by Amezzy Kelly   May 30, 2014


Have you thought of
A life so true like the
Bright blue sky
Where lie is guilty of trespasses

A life where joy replaces
Every tiny traces of pain
Where every dawn of a new day
Brings a smile that burns so bright

A life in a world of equity
Free and boundless
From th reigns of tyrants
And unkind oppressors

Have you thought of
A sublime life
Where death is only
But a prisoner of freedom

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I like this. Piece. It's full of what ifs but if you close your eyes and dream for a moment it can be reality.

    Typo in stanza 1 line 4 I think 'lie' should be 'life' and stanza 3 line 3 'th' should,be 'the'

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I like this. Piece. It's full of what ifs but if you close your eyes and dream for a moment it can be reality.

    Typo in stanza 1 line 4 I think 'lie' should be 'life' and stanza 3 line 3 'th' should,be 'the'

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I like this. Piece. It's full of what ifs but if you close your eyes and dream for a moment it can be reality.

    Typo in stanza 1 line 4 I think 'lie' should be 'life' and stanza 3 line 3 'th' should,be 'the'

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Shruti

    I like this poem full of hope, of how the world can and should be.
    Beautiful.

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