Sometimes I wonder

by Amezzy Kelly   May 22, 2014


Sometimes I wonder
If some are born
For sidelines

Sometimes I wonder
If some are born
To hold the ball close to their chest
Getting all the accolades

Sometimes I wonder
If some are born
To be losers

Sometimes I wonder
Why the winners gets it all
While the losers are empty handed

Sometimes I wonder
Which side I am

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Great write.. We are all wonderers.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Eithne

    The last line cleared it all. We all wonder that yes. But could use different phrase instead of "sometimes I wonder" every time. But the substance is perfect!

  • 8 years ago

    by Eithne

    The last line cleared it all. We all wonder that yes. But could use different phrase instead of "sometimes I wonder" every time. But the substance is perfect!

  • 8 years ago

    by Eithne

    The last line cleared it all. We all wonder that yes. But could use different phrase instead of "sometimes I wonder" every time. But the substance is perfect!

  • 9 years ago

    by Dragon Boy

    There was much repetition! try and use your creativity.

    • 9 years ago

      by Amezzy Kelly

      Thanks for your critique, I will work on that!!!

    • 9 years ago

      by Amezzy Kelly

      Thanks for your critique, I will work on that!!!

    • 9 years ago

      by Amezzy Kelly

      Thanks for your critique, I will work on that!!!

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