Inception.

by Poet on the Piano   Jan 25, 2015


I write about you, talk about
you, think about you
in the recesses
of my delusions-

abstaining then failing
from your short, staggered
breaths.

I pen you
in the darkest corners,
where I cannot bear
any light.

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Written 1/25/15 @ 6:40 PM
Freewrite while listening to "Inception" Time by Hans Zimmer.

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  • 10 years ago

    by GB

    Remarkable and different than the poems I read so far from you, your title caught my attention as well.

    ~in the recesses
    of my delusions-
    ^^That added a real spicy touch the first stanza, making it vague and enthusiastic.

    The rest of the poem as well very neatly penned, see how exciting the writing about writing?! :)
    Excellent piece.

  • 10 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ohhh Get out! SCREAMS! with excitement!

    This shook me... this is powerful!!

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