Just about your eyes

by Everlasting   May 21, 2015

I Want to write about you
And the way I feel when you are near by
But every time you are close to me
I feel like gazing into your eyes;
those hazel eyes,
that got me mesmerized,
lost in time, hypnotized,
And I cant....

I can't write about you.

May 21, 2025 12:12 am


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  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    A sweet and great piece! Made me smile genuinely.

  • 4 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    This is an elegant and simplistic poem that is truly captivating to the readers eye, I was mesmerized beyond belief with this poem!

    Everlasting has once again amazed me with her elegance within her poetry.
    Lovely and beautiful reminder of how the eyes hold and lock such beauty and power... lovely poem!!

  • 4 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hmmmmmmmm interesting

  • 4 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I love this and know exactly what you meant by it!

    I loved the rhythm to this poem most of all, I really felt like it already had a tune to it, like it was lyrics to a song, like the bridge or chorus part.

    Really great flow and I like the ending line being on it's own, I think this emphasises a lot of frustration on the point that you cannot write about this person no matter how much motivation you have to do so.

    Great little write.

  • 4 years ago

    by Damon Dozier

    Great poems, so far, they all seem to be from the heart.

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