Just about your eyes

A sweet and great piece! Made me smile genuinely.

Judging Comment

This is an elegant and simplistic poem that is truly captivating to the readers eye, I was mesmerized beyond belief with this poem!

Everlasting has once again amazed me with her elegance within her poetry.
Lovely and beautiful reminder of how the eyes hold and lock such beauty and power... lovely poem!!

Hmmmmmmmm interesting

I love this and know exactly what you meant by it!

I loved the rhythm to this poem most of all, I really felt like it already had a tune to it, like it was lyrics to a song, like the bridge or chorus part.

Really great flow and I like the ending line being on it's own, I think this emphasises a lot of frustration on the point that you cannot write about this person no matter how much motivation you have to do so.

Great little write.

Great poems, so far, they all seem to be from the heart.