by cassie hughes Sep 2, 2015
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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She lies, |
by Sunshine
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This is brilliantly written. It wraps up a whole self-story. I enjoyed reading this over and over again because it leaves such an impact on the reader. Wanting them to search between the lines for more emotions, more info, some slipping words. |
by Ayesha Dev
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It iz just awesome.The lines are damn touching. |
by DarkLight
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Way to write. I sure will put this into consideration. |
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This brought tears to my face and I have goosebumps. Absolutely incredible, I hope someone else will nominate it, unfortunately I've used all three already. |
by Ben Pickard
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I agree with Ben and as I myself have said countless times, your description and imagery are brilliant and so naturally done. |