Remnants of my Forefathers

Judging comment

Dixiedaisy's poetry is outstanding. She wrote such a creative poem upon Thanksgiving holiday this week and she dove into this piece with elegance. She has such an elegant style that is woven within each line and her love and respect for her family can be felt throughout this entire poem. well done!

Very awesome piece! Thank you for sharing

Kay
Congratulations on your win!
Love Cindy

It is a layer cake you offer here. With the first stanza you begin the delicacy by portraying your first and foremost influences. It seems you inherited a great sensitivity from them, yet you are not prepared to expose it to the world - perhaps you perceive it as a weak spot, a vulnerability.
Next stanza appears to flesh out who you are, but in terms of Poole and Gilman (Venus and Mars). The opposing forces that propel you must have come from each of them.
In the third stanza you come into your own, your Mona Lisa avatar who seeks the inner meaning of her heredity.
Finally we see that regardless of which side you look, you are "grounded" in the soil of your forebears. The potato farmers and the forest protectors, all come together to give you your "self."

Kay
What a wonderful piece you have penned I love how you have put the traits of your family members together in yourself..How you see yourself is awesome.
Excellent job
Love Cindy