Sin

by DarkLight   Feb 13, 2016


In reality,
it's beautiful
Sweet and calling,
thought lingering in your mind.
Truth be,
It's harmful
ugly, without taste.
Thought lingering in your mind.

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Sin is.

    report violation
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  • 7 years ago

    by Lyical Madness

    Wonderfully worded

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Love the portrayal of sin

  • 8 years ago

    by DarkLight

    How true. To my point precisely.

  • 8 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    That repetition of "thought lingering in your mind" - how true is that, how thin is that line between our thoughts and actions? Do we always have sin on our lips, do we always want that taste of it?

    Great brevity here. Makes me think how we can say sin is appealing, lustful, wanting, yet we are left empty because of it. Questioning who we are.

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh I love this piece!

    sin has both good and evil.

    darkness and light-

    Your formatting is wonderful!!

    • 8 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Thanks Maple Tree. It feels great coming from you.:-)

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