The Dream of Completion

by IdTakeABulletForYou   Jun 10, 2016


There are certain beauties in every word you say:
-The light that overtakes the darkness, makes it go away.
-The violent reckoning that destroys all but the path to you.
-The hope I cling to that your word is the truth.

No one could expect a light to be so blinding but fixative;
Each passing second worth the pain, for before I didn't live.
Every moment I hold on I slip further toward my demise,
though just from contact I know your touch is the ultimate high.

In our finite existence, I beg you to be my moment of infinity;
A subtle happiness that, unwavering, never fails me.
My wants propel me into a territory I never knew:
No dream would ever be complete without waking up to you.

-IdTakeABulletForYou

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  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Well thanks I dint know you felt that way (lol) joking aside I like this sweet side to you. It's a nice change to see a love poem from you and a beautiful one to say the least. I feel when you have that special someone that this is how it feels and even in our dark moments they'll help us through.

    All the best, Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Liz

    I wonder if you'll be able to write this good, lovey stuff when you find love! Lol. I do love this, it gives off a good feeling.

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I see work stopped getting in the way.
    Beautiful. Lucky person to wake up with you :)

    • 7 years ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      Dang, that was impressively quick! No one is waking up next to me, unfortunately for me and fortunately for them! I just wrote this to add some variety to what has been, of late, a bunch of whiny poems. Glad you liked it, though. You're the one who has found love, and probably can relate to this poem more than me! Hah!

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