by Hellon   Jul 29, 2016


as a rusting boat slouched sulkily
against the evening sky
and pebbles terraced
the shoreline,
I meandered at the ocean's edge
gazing towards a far-off horizon


@Hellon 29th July 2016


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  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    Pourquoi: French for why... Oh how I love this poem. The setting of the ocean shoreline, is a place where you can go and question things, sort out your thoughts...

    Hellon using the French word for why adds to this piece, giving it such a unique twist and flare to this poem..

    The visual display is breathtaking! Lovely piece!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Congratulations x

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on this beautiful write! I loved it from the moment read it. Well done-

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Congratulations! !!