Destruction at it's finest

I gotta say I'm not into Nature poems, but I really liked this!
The ending

"Animals dying out,
some species long gone.
Now it's too late; yet we still hold hope.
Hope for a future, on another planet
that we are destined to destroy.
For we are the virus...."

is such a true statement, really creatively penned. Though I agree with it, I never would have come up with that metaphor!
"For we are the virus...."

5. Jenn

I'm sorry guys this piece skipped my eye. ... anyway this nature poem is a must read poem. ..delicately written by 2 talented poet.... Well done guys

Gel

This topic must be taken strictly by the government, otherwise the forest will become history; afterall forest is also very very necessary for humans as it helps us in many ways.

If humans will keep on going like this, then I think the result could be disastrous.

I think the writer has done a very good job creating a fantastic poem on this topic. No problems with the writing style.

Humans are not destroying only the forests but also a beautiful domains.

Well done.

Corrections:

In the title, "it's" should be "its".

"Long lived" should be hyphenated, to read "long-lived".

Other than that, this was a raw write about a very hot topic (hah, get what I did there?) in the news: the destruction of our own planet. You can't exponentially increase production of a harmful chemical on a global scale and not expect it to have negative consequences. We literally are destroying our future ... and what will humans learn from that?

From your poem, you presume nothing.
I think the same.

Naomi and Brenda, you have done a wonderful job painting a moving tale of our present and future. I'd nominate it if I could, but lo and behold I am too late -- as are we in saving our planet.

5/5
IdTakeABulletForYou

Great write,