Of Peace and Chaos [Double Acrostic]

by ether   Oct 3, 2016


Caught in the chaos of that biological pump.
hollow eyes carry no sense of space or time,
accompanied by thoughts in a cappella.
oceans governed by the greater zodiac
surge through my veins, offering little peace.

    report violation
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  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    Hats off to Ether!! for pulling off a double acrostic with ease...
    I personally always hard a hard time with these..

    The flow is detailed and fits.. not choppy.. just right!

    a universal angle of elegance!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Double acrostic...cleverly penned and crafted.
    Congrats on the Win!

  • 9 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Ether ,

    you are clever. .. you make a difficult form

    TO

    Gel

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    This is a fantastic write congratulations on the win it deserves to be highlighted!

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your win! A beautiful double acrostic. Well done-

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