French Kiss (Rictameter)

by Maple Tree   Oct 20, 2016


French kiss
my thoughts within
a slumbering night sky
so that my dreams can purify
this soul, once lost during a chaotic
midnight thunderstorm of Autumn,
endless waves of Paris
will grant me a
French kiss.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved the layout and the French connection beautifully written as usual. Milly x

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, as always, your visuals are spot on, this is just lovely and the format, really neat. Well done!

  • 9 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Andrea ,

    I'm hooked up by the title. A nice french kiss in Paris France. .hi hi hi well done. ..

    Gelyn

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a lovely form this is and how beautifully written.

    Well done, Andrea

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Andrea as always this is beautifully done.
    It can go many ways and I guess that's what poetry is all about.

    Fantastic, Em

    • 9 years ago

      by Maple Tree

      Thank you Em and Deeply delightful!!

      Hugs you both!

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