How To Predict Your Future (Day 3)

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Oct 31, 2016


The best way to know your future
Is to plan and work for it today.
If there's no bridge to connect you with your dreams,
Well I suppose, you better make your own blueprint,
And make your own way to make it happen.

Gel

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  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    So very true Gel, words to live by. Well done-

  • 9 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Beautifully said Gel!

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Gel,

    So day 3 already. I like what you are trying to say, but where has the 5 lsyllables per line disappeared to? I would love to see you hone this into your strict form.

    If the bridge isn't there to help, you best make a blueprint to show you the way.

    Only a suggestion, Gel. Either way it's sound advice.

    Take care,

    Michael x

    • 9 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Yah Sir Michael my brain didn't work well lol ...tomorrow I'll stick to my form. .. I know you're clever to notice. ..

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