Worlds Collide

"It's not always a pretty place,
Sometimes a storm will blow.
The art of a relationship
Is knowing when to let things go."

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YESSSS!!! Love it, love it, LOVE IT!

Truly remarkable write from you here! You speak words so true...I kept wanting to raise my hand while reading this and scream "preach!"
...
And maybe I did...once or twice.

Amazing job and a well deserved nomination! :)

I will never tell you all of me,
For that's for you to find,
All the joys and all my passions,
There are still treasures I hide.

^^This is one of the good things about a relationship, rather then telling
and come straight off as a self centered person, its best to leave certain things
for the other to find for that is when we learn to appreciate a relationship.

I'll never truly figure you out,
And you'll never entirely figure me.

^^Even after many years we will still be trying to figure out the
other person...trust me its endless!

So we plot and trace to find a path,
Something, that will work.
You know sometimes we're going to clash
But welcome to my world.

^^The truth simply put yes there will be clashes as differences
starts to show but that is the learning process of a relationship take it
or leave it.

It's not always a pretty place,
Sometimes a storm will blow.
The art of a relationship
Is knowing when to let things go.

^^Wise words...to let it go is the most difficult but sometimes
one needs to know how to do that or it will lead to the ruins of a
relationship.

Planets move and circulate
Revolving around each other,
The dance eternal will never stop
They're not planets

They are lovers

Simply love this ending it really finishes off the poem in a meaningful way. Planets are
always revolving around each other like lovers...nicely penned!

EPIC.

Nominated. right off the bat.

Ben

I'm sorry folks, I woke with this in my head and had to finish it. Feel like I'm flooding the site with my random thoughts.

I will try again to sleep. Sorry once more