by Fredy RoMa0u Sanchez May 28, 2017
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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It seems like Here we go again |
by Lost One
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Great use of license with "again" and "pretend," I wouldn't have thought of that. |
by Ren
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Like Michael said, this is a very powerful and emotional write, with flawless rhyming and a smooth flow. Well done!! |
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Thank you! |
by Michael
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Nice piece of writing Fredy |
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Thank you! I appreciate that! |
by Ben Pickard
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I bet it all on love and lost on a straight flush |
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Thank you! I appreciate the time you put reading my work! |