Beautiful Stars

by Maple Tree   Jun 7, 2017


Secrets fall like rain showers
dangling under weeping willows,
as whispers filter during a midnight fog.

The glory of darkness shelters a heart
from broken sorrow, cave dwellers know
when to protect themselves from sunshine.

Fingertips tease a river still;
circling emotions under stars-

There she finds comfort
as silence conceals
truth within tears -

her weeping eyes
of willowy stars.

They will never know she wept.

    report violation
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  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Judging Comment:

    This is nature at its best, tender and soft with a mother’s touch
    and at the same time the sadness felt within each line lingers
    long after. I like the visuals and the choice of words it make
    this write so beautifully sad and moving.

  • 6 years ago

    by Angie

    You've always had a way with words and pulling people in with them. This is one I can truly say "I can relate"

    I Love You!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Another stunning piece by you, Andrea! Just beautiful!

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Nor will they hear her weep...

    Just beautiful

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, your ability to capture so much emotion with such beautiful visuals is indeed a gift. Thank you for sharing your gift with us-hugs-

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