Hold Me Down

by AnnaCG   Jun 9, 2017


I'm insecure; please strap me down.
Before I tumble back into my doubt.
Once I fall in, I can't help myself.
The sides are too steep to climb out.

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You've lifted me up so quickly,
There's no hope of reaching the floor.
And this little bit of air you breathe into me,
Leaves me gasping and begging for more.

Work in progress..

Copyright Acgneth 2017

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  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    I really like where you are going with this, flows wonderfully.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    In my opinion I think it's beautiful just the way it is.

    Take care

  • 6 years ago

    by Alec

    This is beautiful. With all the posts about the PnQ ball I almost missed it. Well rhymed and without losing its messege

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