Sweet dreams
by Michael Jun 12, 2017
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8 years agoby Em
This was all sweet and innocent until I read n's comment lol!!!
Loved it but I think I've put about 5 stone on just by reading this hahaha-
8 years ago
Sorry Em!!! Haha dirty mind today!
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8 years ago
by Michael
You girls! I thought it was men majority who look for the naughtiness in their minds hahaha
Thanks Em, I'm just keeping this 'sweet' :) -
8 years ago
by Em
Michael I think is women are worse lol
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8 years ago
by Michael
Thank you Brenda :)
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8 years ago
by Brenda
Michael, such a "sweet" write-it definitely caters to my sweet tooth. Very creative!
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8 years ago
who doesnt love a good sweet!! however being me, my mind went to the gutter! Sorry !!!
a fondant fountain spraying
fresh whipped double cream
I lay upon a strawberry patch
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This part in particular ;)
Love this poem though xx keep it up!!!-
8 years ago
by Michael
Thanks DD
Haha, well in honesty until your comments I really was so far away from what I think your thinking, but yes I see.
However that is your perspective and not mine which is quite funny and what poetry is all about :)
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8 years ago
by mossgirl19
Creatively delicious...left me dreamy...
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8 years ago
by Michael
Thanks Miss M :)
Actually helped a little to get a bit of sleep
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