by Ren Apr 18, 2016
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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A shadow among city lights, |
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fairytale is my thing I like it |
by Ren
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Thanks so much! |
by Sai
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I love poetry that takes inspiration from the classic fairytales. Well done on the rhyme scheme as well. |
by Ren
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Thank you so much! Your comment is truly appreciated! :) |
by mossgirl19
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I hope I can come to Neverland too! This is breathtaking, Cowgirl! So excellently told. You rock! |
by Ren
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Absolutely dear Lady! Fellow Lost Boys are always welcome :) thank you so much for reading and commenting!! You rock! |
by Alec
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For you can't be Lost |
by Ren
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Hahaha that's awesome, thank you so much, fellow Lost Boy :) I'm glad you enjoyed it! |
by Naughtymouse
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Ren this is an awesome write!! Really this is so absorbing and magical, great word choice and I like the way your rhymes flow. |
by Ren
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Thank you so much Ben!!! I really appreciate your wonderful comment :) I'm glad you enjoyed this. |