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by Phil Aug 18, 2017
Sadness, depression /
Sparkly eyes seep
Derived from being
Sugar coated no more but
Still painful to recall.
Phil, well done acrostic. Nice to see something on the boards from you. I feel you put sadness in perspective.
I love acrostics, and your piece is extremely wonderful, full of emotions of sadness
You just nailed it, Phil. Loved it.
by Ben Pickard
Acrostics are never easy when done well and, personally, I have always found them difficult when trying to incorporate rhyme. As sad as this is, it's well done indeed.
All the best, Phil,
by The Po whet