Sadness (acrostic)

by Phil   Aug 18, 2017


Sparkly eyes seep
Alarming truths
Derived from being
Neglected and
Extremely abused.
Sugar coated no more but
Still painful to recall.

PW 18/08/2017

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  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    Phil, well done acrostic. Nice to see something on the boards from you. I feel you put sadness in perspective.

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    Hey fella

    I love acrostics, and your piece is extremely wonderful, full of emotions of sadness

    Nice one!

    Michael :)

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    You just nailed it, Phil. Loved it.

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Acrostics are never easy when done well and, personally, I have always found them difficult when trying to incorporate rhyme. As sad as this is, it's well done indeed.
    All the best, Phil,
    Ben

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