Seasons - Haiku vingnette

by Brenda   Jul 29, 2017


Spring
When Robins arrive
heralding the suns warm rays,
tulips greet the day...

Summer
Long hot days of fun
swimming holes to take a plunge,
camping out under stars...

Fall
Crisp leaves underfoot
glorious color abounds,
God's palette displayed...

Winter
Diamonds falling down
quiets the worlds noises
peace settles about...

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  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    JUDGES COMMENT: Brenda always has this way when she writes something that seems to come from personal view, knowledge or both and they always bring me so much emotion so I'd like to thank her for that especially as this piece is no different.

  • 3 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Brenda, I completely agree with Sai on this. You know each one of us has our favorite season in the year, like, I like winter more than the summer.
    But you my friend somehow managed to look every season so so so beautiful in the eyes of the reader.

    Thank you so much for bringing this into existence.

    • 3 years ago

      by Brenda

      Awww thank you so much for your kind comments! You really brighten my day.

  • 3 years ago

    by Sai

    This paints such pretty pictures in my mind. You let the reader experience an entire year in this little poem.

    • 3 years ago

      by Brenda

      Sai, thank you so much. It was a fun write to do.

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    Love this B

    • 3 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much Em! Hugs-

  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This is a beautiful display of seasons !!!!

    • 3 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much Andrea, coming from our true nature girl, high praise indeed.

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