Hey hOpeful! I really like this poem, are you a blind person? Jesus said it is the blind that truly see!
As Em said it is very clever, and it's Metaphor style is after my own heart. Brown is bitter;
the piping hot
liquid that helps
to repel the throes
eyes forced open. I Liked these words, as to me, it talks about Caffeine that stimulates the brain of those of sight and those deprived of light,equally. Great work, glad you won, added to my favorites! Crafty Ken
Explaining color to a blind man by hopeful points 10
This spoke to me probably more than I could put down in words (which sounds funny coming from a poet here) but this is extremely clever and even though somewhat sad it's beautifully crafted and reads so smoothly especially when read aloud and the explanation of each colour was very profound.