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by Michael Jun 11, 2018
Sadness, depression /
... it rained today, and yesterday
my bluey sky, growls black and grey.
The rock I built with sweat and scrim
erodes with haste from outside in
..and all inside has washed away
The eyeing storm comes more to slay
and leaves me slumped upon the clay.
A textured place, somewhat akin
....it rained today..
..like yesterday, it rained all day
Its hard to keep the storm at bay.
So while my soul is damp within
I’ll brace the weathers darkly spin
and hope to feel a sunshine ray
......it rained today
by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko
Wow! The flow is perfect! Just beautiful!
Thank you MKKK :)
by Dagmar Wilson
Glad to see this nominated. I am speechless. Hugs to you
Thank you Miss Dagmar :)x
by Kitty Cat Lady
Michael this is brilliant. So dark and moody, each word suits the theme perfectly and the Rondeau has been perfectly executed. Bravo! :-) x
"So while my soul is damp within."
This line was beautiful, this whole poem was beautiful.
Amazing write, definetly adding to my favourites without hesitation.
thank you Fenrir, lovely comments :)