A storm has brewed (Rondeau)

by Michael   Jun 11, 2018


... it rained today, and yesterday
my bluey sky, growls black and grey.
The rock I built with sweat and scrim
erodes with haste from outside in
..and all inside has washed away

The eyeing storm comes more to slay
and leaves me slumped upon the clay.
A textured place, somewhat akin
....it rained today..

..like yesterday, it rained all day
Its hard to keep the storm at bay.
So while my soul is damp within
I’ll brace the weathers darkly spin
and hope to feel a sunshine ray
......it rained today

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  • 5 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Wow! The flow is perfect! Just beautiful!

    --- MKKK

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you MKKK :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Wow! The flow is perfect! Just beautiful!

    --- MKKK

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Glad to see this nominated. I am speechless. Hugs to you

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar :)x

  • 5 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Michael this is brilliant. So dark and moody, each word suits the theme perfectly and the Rondeau has been perfectly executed. Bravo! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 5 years ago

    by Blank

    "So while my soul is damp within."
    This line was beautiful, this whole poem was beautiful.
    Amazing write, definetly adding to my favourites without hesitation.

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      thank you Fenrir, lovely comments :)

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