Another one bites the dust...

by deeplydesturbed   Jul 10, 2018


I can’t take much more
All this death at my front door
Hitting hearts hard-core

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  • 7 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Oh N I'm so sorry truly I am sending massive hugs your way xx x

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Nams, stay strong...this will not be forever..hugs to you-

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    The hits really do keep coming, don't they?
    Nicely written senyru style poem with rhyme.
    ((Hugs)) x

  • 7 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Very sad and deep. Heartbreak in a few lines. Hugs to you

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Nams,
    a truly hard-hitting piece, with so much depth.
    Very good indeed

    Michael :)x

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