Twilight memories (Rondeau)

by Michael   Aug 8, 2018


..as twilight fades in light of dawn
I will forever weep and mourn
your lullabies came from the moon
and stars came dancing in my room
throughout the night until the morn

your heart sang out when I was born
gloaming words so sweet and warm
your voice but now a distant tune
... as twilight fades

i wish you here in times forlorn
with lunar songs to calm the storm
some nights i sit beneath the moon
knowing the day will be here soon
and once again i’ll weep and mourn
... as twilight fades

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  • 5 years ago

    by Darren

    judges comment

    I was in two minds about awarding this a 10 or 7 points, purely because I am no expert on writing a Rondeau. In fact I have never written one. So I looked at this from a different POV and I am judging this on the content. I love the depth of feeling in this piece, it is cleverly written and the rhyming is used well. As you read it conjures many images, a piece of colorful poetry. Well written 10 points.

    (in fact I did attempt one and I am still dismayed by the form.)

  • 5 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    Such a gorgeous piece of poetry!!

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you AO :)

  • 5 years ago

    by yogi73

    Congrats on the win. This is great poem. It's sad emotions come thru in beautiful images of your words

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Nice words thank you yogi :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Mark

    Great win Michael!

  • 5 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Judges made it memorable too by bringing it on front page. I am happy for you, my friend, and grateful to them.

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Kind words Sg thank you :)

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