I happened to read this piece at a moment when I was feeling something very similar and connected to your poem very well. The feeling you explored in the words you used were very sensitive in a way that I caught them. This piece was a perfect description of what my morning dream made me feel, and I love it for making me feel not like the only one. :)
Its breathtaking within each line,
filled with emotion to be the person
you want to become, to find your true soul
and yet society makes you crouch into a corner
questioning your thoughts, fears and struggles.