Under a Flower (Double Haiku)

by Star   Jan 4, 2019


In the shade of a
flower, she stacked petals of
different colors.

Collecting spring in
a beautiful basket of
roots, twigs, leaves and dirt.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hi.
    There's a mystical quality to this haiku chain. To me I see a fairy hovering above multi-coloured fallen petals. In her basket, all that is Spring.
    Lovely work.

    • 6 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you Me.Darcy :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Wow, so gutted I missed this one.

    • 6 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you so much :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    A lovely haiku, makes me yearn for spring and flowers blooming. Well done-

    • 6 years ago

      by Star

      Thanl youuu!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Star

    Thank you ladies :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Just Beautiful <3

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