ewe should know better (haiku)

by - Mr. Darcy   Jun 2, 2019


nudging mum for a
crafty suckle, her eldest

lamb's tail shakes its bliss

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- Mr. Darcy
© 2019

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  • 1 week ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Another well nailed Haiku :) Milly x

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    As always Michael, quite clever...love this!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Jamie

    I always love a good pun when reading a poem but i love this even more because it fits the poem perfectly. The imagery is great and the poem is filled with happiness, there is definitely nothing i would personally change as i think the haiku is perfect the way it is. Well done

    • 2 weeks ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      Thanks, Jamie.
      We've just spent a few days in a field of sheep. This poem was one of many observations.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    'ewe' - I see what you did there, Michael. Very clever. You see? Not a thing gets past me...

    Take care

  • 2 weeks ago

    by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

    Aww I can just picture the wee lamb here ... Nudging it mum . Love lambs... They are so cute skipping about the fields.

    Great poem title!

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