you want more... (syntuit)

by - Mr. Darcy   Feb 5, 2019


eating greedily
from the acceptance table

never fills that hole

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- Mr. Darcy
© 2019

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  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    judging comment

    you want more...(syntuit) by Mr. Darcy 4 points
    Yes, you can eat from that table as long and as greedily as you like, but you will never get full up. You will just want more and more, like a drug that slowly consumes all that's good in you but never fills the void. A fine little lesson here in three simple lines, proving it really is quality not quantity...especially at the 'acceptance table'.

  • 7 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Greed never is satisfied... congratulations on your win Milly x

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well done, Michael

  • 7 months ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    You have adopted the pure essence of the syntuit
    No one, including myself, does it better!

    • 7 months ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      Thank you, Larry. I do hope this form becomes commonplace, taking its rightful place alongside the Haiku and Senyru.

  • 7 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    thank you, Brenda. I am sure many of us, myself included, know this only too well.

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