by ddavidd Jun 24, 2019
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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This is the time |
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I like the way that you have woven throughout references to drinking. With some great metaphors. Particularly liked "to tie our stars to these hollow chalices" and "We need to ferment in darkness like wine" . Milly |
by ddavidd
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Thanks, Milli for your time and understanding. |