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by Milly Hayward Jul 23, 2019
Love, romance /
My night is dark, no love to give me light
though moonlight glimmers on the distant shore
Faint hope to light a pathway from my plight
return love's essence to this troubled door
The tide is full, waves thrust upon the beach
across the bay they form a wall of stone
A cold intent to keep love from my reach
has struck my lovers heart and now my own
If I could muster just one message clear
through wind and crashing seas, a grating cry
'Twould echo through the world for all to hear
In love there is no sense nor reason why.
You are the light that shines across my soul
that leads me back to you, my treasured goal
Love does find a way. I enjoyed specially the couplet. Keep on writing. You are doing a good job.
A beautifully written sonnet Milly and glad to see it nominated.
by Milly Hayward
Thank you Walter, I find them quite difficult to write because I am not good with metaphors but I am trying my best. Milly x
Thank you Brenda for your nomination.
It really made my day. I'm just finding my feet with sonnets so am still experimenting with metaphors. Thank you Mark and Leonie really glad you liked it. Milly x
Lovely Milly! Nominated!
I agree, beautiful!
by Kitty Cat Lady