by cassie hughes May 19, 2020
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Dancing sparkles shimmer on its undulating surface, |
by D.
I love the ocean, and since I'm living in the middle of a desert at the moment, this is a soothing piece for me. Your wide vocabulary range gives life to this snapshot. I think it is a little over-worded in places, and doesn't breathe as much as it could, but still, beautiful! |