Mute Moon

by Gracy Judith   Jun 21, 2020


I want to
cut loose the moon
watch it plunge
into this verse
but there she sits
a luring sphere of gleam
whole and mute
my only companion
suspended
in the wide expanse
of grey

-by Gracy Judith (GJ)

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  • 2 days ago

    by Meena Krish

    Short write but much is said in such simplicity and beauty..liked the read! Congrats on the Win and welcome to the site :)

    • 2 days ago

      by Gracy Judith

      Glad you liked it Meena. Thanks a lot for your feedback. Much appreciated.

  • 1 week ago

    by Daniel

    Welcome to P&Q. I've read all three of your poems, and I must say, in particular this piece, have wonderful word choice. Your line endings are beautifully chosen, resulting in a natural flow when reading. Looking forward to reading more from you! :)

    • 1 week ago

      by Gracy Judith

      Thank you so much Daniel for reading my poems and for your feedback. Glad you liked this piece...it's one of my favourites too. I look forward to engaging more with this lovely community...very creative bunch and the feedback received from fellow poets does help. Thanks again :-)

  • 1 week ago

    by hiraeth

    I love the imagery in this piece! Well written!

    • 1 week ago

      by Gracy Judith

      Glad you liked it. Thank you so much.

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