by Maple Tree Oct 12, 2020
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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I've become uncomfortable |
by Walter
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Wow! |
by Star
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This gives me chills, and I see you in this poem there us so much depth in it! |
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Those last few lines are my absolute favorite, and give me chills and sadness. "breath" should be "breathe" though, but I felt that constriction in this. The inability to truly breathe in and out, in the moment, and trying to process another's emotions and feelings toward you. |
by Brenda
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Beautiful Andrea! |
by Violet Raven
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Love this! |