Eternal Perseverance

by Star   Nov 16, 2020

They swayed
into darkness,
and danced to the
beat of silence;

she became friends
with a shadow that
flutters over
creamy petals.

Her inadequate smile,
fades with a midnight
that forgot the scent
of magnolia.

A lunar bond
illuminates the lighter
shades of her spirit,

as she picks up
the first glimpse
of a new moon.


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  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    A curious dance STAR, that holds a gentle beauty in my eyes.
    nicely penned
    M :)

    • 2 months ago

      by Star

      Thank you so much :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Steps through time can feel like a dance. The best dances are those shared. No matter how tough the moves are, there's always a new moon on the horizon.

    Lovely work.

    • 2 months ago

      by Star

      An eternal balanced dance with a shadow does that count? And thats one real good comment Mr. Darcy :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    So dreamy in your words, a really lovely write.

    • 2 months ago

      by Star

      Thabk you ^_^

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