Hello, I'm tired

by Obscure   Dec 28, 2022


I'm quite afraid that I have failed
There's nothing in the drinking pail
I took it all but now I'm empty
Stole the world and then it left me
Opened up my heart to feel
Even though it wasn't real
I made believe that things were honest
Told a story, made a promise
Broke some hearts and made a mess
Honestly don't know what's left
I'd try again if I knew how
But nothing feels important now

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  • 3 weeks ago

    by Xaque

    This writer's impactful voice carried so well throughout this piece. What a grabbing, emotional read. The flow is great. Deeply meaningful line by line. So well done. I absolutely love this

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Ricky Story

    I guess it’s a blessing that with some devotion.. blessing your pain with enough not only pain hope and ability to be driven to continue trying to put the shattered pieces back together to mend your heart for an inconceivable beautiful life you haven’t experienced or possibly can’t imagine. You can learn to achieve better

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Star

    I know how it feels when everything loses value, and you feel really tired!! I really dont know what to say except hang in there you’ll get through it, you’re not alone everyone fails and messes up. As cliche as it sounds, but thats really how we learn and grow up.

    I missed being active, I’ll try to comment more :)

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