by Skyfire   Dec 15, 2021

is like a small fish
keen to changes
in your current
a constant alertness
for the presence of

like the rippling
of fins.


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  • 2 years ago

    by RavenBunny

    Beautiful. Instant favorite.

  • 2 years ago

    by Walter

    Wow Skyfire!..Added to my favorites

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    Love this Skyfire :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I love how sensitive this piece is itself, if that makes sense. It's such a unique simile, and there's a vulnerability in one's own self-awareness and trying to understand even the smallest change, and ride that current. So much said in this in only a few lines!

  • 2 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A well thought out metaphor for sensitivity that hits the nail on its head. Milly x

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