I'd Fall

by Danielle   Sep 2, 2004


They fall so endlessly -- Down my broken face
Like a river with no water -- Im an empty disgrace

Lost with out feelings -- I dont know where I belong
I cant stop the flow -- The tears have fallen for so long

My heart is black and dead -- My world is cold n' bare
Abandoned in this road -- Of loneliness and despair

You left me with out an answer -- Left me crying on my knees
So I sit here once again -- Miserable and wondering

What happened to me n' you? --What exactly went wrong?
Was I not good enough? -- Not good enough all along?

I sit a top this world -- And look down up on you
Youve moved on long ago -- And I know I should too

You just cloud my vision -- My tears fall in memory
My heart bleeds more -- Im dying inside me

I take this rope around my neck -- I take my final breath
There falls a note -- As I fall to my death

It said how much I loved you -- How you left me all behind
And as youre reading this -- I hope you die inside

It said how I needed your love -- How my life, I lived for you
It said I couldnt let go -- Now I die for you too'

And the final line that I wrote -- Was live in wretchedness
Until the day you die -- Live in loneliness

Splattered from top to bottom -- Blood along the walls
Read my red message --With out you Id fall.

Please just be honest.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie M.

    That was great. I added you to my favorites you and another author are the only ones were I'll read everything you guys have wrote! Everything you write is how I feel or have felt. And this poem reminded me of how I feel/felt for someone but now I finally realized I've wasted my tears on him for seven years! I love your poems and I'm rating them all!

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ZOMGEMO

    Ok, honsetly... I LOVED IT =D

    Stay Strong ^_^

    *..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by Illusion

    Man oh man.......I can relate to this poem...geez, it's kind of scary actually...it feels as if..you took the thoughts out of my head..and wrote them down for me.

    Great Poem

    DFK

  • 19 years ago

    by hayley williams

    Hey Danielle, i havent talked to you for awhile and had no idea you felt this way...if you ever need to talk...
    Amazing poem though...truly hayley xx

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