My future

by Nefarius   Sep 23, 2004


It has slipped away
-Into the void
And all my life
-Being destroyed
It has gone
-What I admired
I can't go on
-Now I am tired
So I left my path
-None to embrace
The world grows dark
-Which I now face
My darkest nightmare
-Could it be?
The end to bear
-No future's left for me

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  • 19 years ago

    by Luvmeluvr

    You are very talented. I really like your poems. They are beautifully written and the flow nicely. Wonderful job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Interesting way of writing.. I loved it! =) Keep it up!

    ~Grace

  • 19 years ago

    by Nefarius

    thx for your comment
    it was very difficult for me to write it because i tried to make three in one
    - you can read it whole and you can read it every even or every uneven line, did you see that?

  • 19 years ago

    by Kari

    very good i like it ***** stars