My final good byes

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Nov 5, 2004


Im sorry but life just is not worth this pain,
its time for me to say my good-byes,
lets take one more stroll down memory lane,
please didn't cry;wipe the tears from your eyes.

Its better this way,
but please didn't you forget,
i Love u all more than words can say,
but this is one thing i know ill never regret.

Each cut is a step up to heaven's door,
one more and i'll be there,
I just can't stay here anymore,
this life i cannot bare.

So i pick up the knife and cut,
one more step and i'm at the door,
i have a sinking feeling in my gut,
but the door opens and i take my first step onto heavens floor.

© Jenna Elphick
November 4, 2004

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  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    This was one of my favorites out of all the ones i have read of yours. amazing work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Awe jenna darling.. its so sad and kept me interested.. i love you so very much.. you no that right..

    but the last line.. i think it sorta trhoughts the poem off being so long and such...

    other wise i love it!

    _terra

  • 19 years ago

    by Tarikins

    That was pretty good, and ty for leaving your comment on my poem was nice of you. Keep up the good work!

    -*~*Fre@k*~*