by Kara ! Nov 12, 2004
category :
Life, society /
about society
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I wait around, but no one calls at all |
by creasy
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that was really good!! keep it up!! thanks for the comments!! :) |
by Danielle
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I like the different perspectives in this poem...gives it some individuality |
by blarg
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great! word flow could use a little work but other then that..GREAT! |
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Another awesome poem and thanks for the comment |
by Mustardhart
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Great!! Simply great. Sort of prophetic, a mixture of confidence and insight. I like your thinking girlie!! |