We try

by Kara !   Nov 12, 2004


I wait around, but no one calls at all
I sit alone, and wait for you to fall
I wish I could soothe your hurt,
but I can't.

He talks of life, and days of newborn fun
He sings a song, sharing the secret One
He tries to change their minds,
but he can't.

She cries at night, breaking from the pain
She look outside, living life in vain
She wants to scream, get away,
but she can't.

You're stuck to live, in the same recurrent way
You strive to work, and finally have your say
You want to move on with the world,
but you never will.

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  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    that was really good!! keep it up!! thanks for the comments!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    I like the different perspectives in this poem...gives it some individuality

  • 19 years ago

    by blarg

    great! word flow could use a little work but other then that..GREAT!
    hugs,blarg

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Another awesome poem and thanks for the comment

  • 19 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Great!! Simply great. Sort of prophetic, a mixture of confidence and insight. I like your thinking girlie!!