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by Infected with His Deadly Love   Nov 17, 2004


From the day I saw you
I thought we would be
Together forever
But I guess I didnt see
What you were really like
And that you lied to me
But now your gone
And I'm set free
All the times you said you love me
I guess you just lied
When I saw you with her
I just could of died.

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    The rhyme scheme in this is off...but a very understandable ending. That was a nice way to end it though terribly sorry!
    Charisma*

  • 18 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Love it!!!

    Dean xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Ouch. I know that pain. This poem was short and sweet, but I am known to give my opinion out loud and proud. And here's my two cents:
    It was a really heartfelt right, I mean in a few words you certainly made me remember that feeling. However, the end of it seemed a little forced. I don't know what you could do to fix it, and I hope you don't take it too personally - as a writer should write to keep themselves happy, and nobody else. So don't take this too close to heart. It just seemed a rather forced ending to a great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    Love this one too...It really speaks out...Another Fantastic Poem..Joc

  • 18 years ago

    by LyricalFlow

    Cool, liked it.