A Helpless Child Reaching For Someones Hand

by Heather M Craig   Dec 10, 2004


I feel like a helpless child
reaching for someones hand
keeping confused thoughts inside,
maybe i will find the eyes and heart of someone who understands.

A lost little girl with a mind of clutter,
a heart of pieces that are black and blue,
a soul outlined in black of ashes that stain
with the questions of what to do.

I feel like a helpless child
reaching for someones hand
wanting and waiting to let the confused thoughts out
but can't find the heart and eyes of someone who understands.

*this is one of my shortest poems and i am sure you all get the meaning behind it...Please comment and vote. i will do the same for you. thanks a lot. loves.

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  • 19 years ago

    by christina

    great poem i loved it :D
    peace

  • 19 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    I LOVED EVERY SINGLE LINE!! great job heather!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Krete

    Hmm...This is an interesting poem. I like how your third stanza dwells on the idea of being, rather the reality, of being the helpless child.

    Its an interesting outcry to societ, and God. I like it. 5/5

    God Bless;)

  • 19 years ago

    by Scaleeski

    Awww..it's so sad..AWESOME THOUGH!

    Chris

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Great poem with lots of meaning! I really liked it *5*!!!
    xoxox