Those Above

by rachel   Jan 2, 2005


Do the stars look down upon my crying eyes?
Did they know what he did and all his hurtful lies?
Do they wish they could fix this stupid mess?
Did they even have the power to stop all the stress?
Will they look at my life and wonder why I cry?
Were they always there, being the knowing spy?

Did the moon see my misled discretions?
Does she watch me in my depressions?
Did she know what he was about to commit?
Did she wonder why I did submit?
Wasn’t she concerned by knowledge of the end?
Why to my heart did she not tend?

Does the sun in sky see my sad face?
Did he watch as my love cheated without a trace?
Could he tell I was doomed by fate?
Did he finally choose to help only finding it was too late?
Did he cry with me in my misfortune?
Would he wish it was not me this fate had to be done?

Do the clouds see all there is to see?
Did they decide He and I couldn’t be?
Or did they watch above helplessly?
As my life started to manage messily?
Were they sad as they watched me cry out?
Did they scream as I did and shout?

Would the sky think about me?
In my sorrow, would it let me see?
Does it hide the truth in which I deserve?
Or did it watch silently waiting to serve?
Could the sky feel my painful aching?
Did it know my heart was breaking?

Does the rain shower upon my heart with love?
Did it care when It fell from far above?
Was it sorry for this situation?
Was it unable to move from its station?
When it cried as I did, were there the same tears?
Does the rain always know all my deepest fears?

Did the stars and the moon wish to heal me?
Did the sun and the clouds want me to see?
The sky and the rain, did they see me weeping?
Did all of them, together, see him creeping?

I wonder what they know, those up above
Do they even know who I am and who I love?
Could they change what fate proclaims?
Do they watch as life's pain stains?
High up there, I wish I could know
Everything they knew I wish it would show

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amilo

    Okay...

    I like the general idea of this poem and the basic layout... and I know that you must have felt depressed while writing this... but... I think you've put too many questions in a single poem. If I were you I'd shorten it a little bit...

    Otherwise, good job.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    lovely oustanding masterpiece .......5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
    beautiful amazing what else can i say thaks for sharing

  • 19 years ago

    by Steven

    nice poem! really nice

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