Take me!

by Knight_of_Blackrose   Jan 7, 2005


These thoughts that stab inside my head!
They tell me I'd be better off dead
Sweetly whispered thoughts of self destruction
Are my instruction
I won't let you take me
Yet your sultry suggestions still rape me
"Just end it now, so easy it would be."
"Take that short jaunt to the cabinet, pull that gun out and see!"
I won't let you take me
Yet your pressure tries to force me
"You have nothing, no one, and an empty void."
"Just put the truck in drive and let it find its' way into the icy lake!"
I won't let your tempting suggestions persuade me
Yet you still try to make me
"Find some pills!"
"Make all that pain go away"
I can't let your sweet suggestions take me
Can I?

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  • 19 years ago

    by priya

    hey, this is the first time im reading ur poems(i think). but i aready like them a lot. u have a nice way of putting wrods together. please, is what i think what u wrote or gonna do? if so dont. wht u said in ur poem is not true "there's no one for you", dont believ that, there are a lot of people who likes u, including me. keep up the great work!!
    5/5 later

  • 19 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    woah holy crap... excellent poem, worth a million fives and I hope it gets em... Are you ok? You haven't been online and now this... Get back to me, email msn, comment, w/e.

    emma x

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    thanks for the comment but Aaron, no, i have no reason to tend to me first when i want to do this. yourwelcome for listening. i wish u were on now so i at least know u r ok. i''m here no matter if u want it or not. i will always put u above me...
    <3 Heather Craig.

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