Compared Too

by Robert   Jan 20, 2005




Like to creatures gathering the fruits of a flower,
theses are the same qualities I find in you that tower.
A body of delicate grace and beauty beyond compare,
a vision of a creature you just wish to stare.
Molded are the humming bird and the butterfly I see in you,
for those the best creatures that has showed me what is true.
Suckling of the nectar from a flowers core,
my eye witnesses you and my body wants more.
With the speed the humming bird that darts in every direction sure of where to go,
I see in you the determination and devotion in each acting show.
Your body knows with instinct on what to do at all times of the day,
and from this very action causes me a state of disarray.
The your skin as soft as the Monarch’s wings carrying them to all height,
touching it with mind blows my mind clean out of sight.
I hunger for your touch and remain true to you loft voice,
I know my love is given to you by my undying choice.
If I could compare you to any life that walks swims, or can fly,
for my love you are connected mostly to the hummingbird and butterfly.

Written By
Robert Lee Niswander
Copyright 2005

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jaymes Haze

    That was such a delicate poem.
    You never strayed far from your subject and you clearly talked about the one and only one thing you needed too.

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    The love from this poem flows off the page and reatches all who read it.
    the only thing i dont get is all the nature analogies. but it seemed to work here.
    great job.
    5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Another great poem i love everything about it...It had a nice flow to it....The word choice was great...It was easy to read and to understand...beautiful....5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This reminded me of my boyfriend it is real sweet and you must have a huuuuge heart to write something this beautiful xxx alex xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Awww that was so cute!!! And amazing i really really loved the ending...it was excellent!