Pushed

by Robert   May 29, 2007


Pushed and I step back to recoup,
just give me a second to reel your body into a loop.
Blood staining my chin dazed from one hit,
but as I turn my face, you shall feel my spit.
In disgust you try to yell insults where I stand,
but before long, you feel my fist land.
My knuckles tearing into flesh that was once there,
and my anger drawing forth, unwilling to care.
A rage that has brought this down upon you,
has told me what awful damage I am to do.
Within seconds I am on your body, tearing everything in sight,
only to be fueled by hurt and rage, to end this fight.
Arms stem at side-to-side hoping to block the on slot for cuff to fist,
but with each connection of my hands, the pain you will not resist.
Tears fall to your ears as the fists hit the mark of your cheeks and face,
you try to guard so well, but my anger is set on every place.
My body tense in anger subsides, as exhaustion hits every muscle I can feel.
I slow down, breathing fast and stopping my final blow for the kill.
My eyes are wide open, and the inner monsters rage is all let for us to see,
for I asked you once, to please let me be.
You had to see for yourself, what my pain and frustration could do,
now look what has happen to the bully that is you?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    I LOVE THIS POEM , MAYBE BECAUSE OF ALL THE ANGER AND RAGE IN IT, I THINK THAT PUT THE EMOTION INTO YOUR WRITE WHICH MADE IT SO GREAT...!!!...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Okay..how I love this.

    Your descriptions are excellent in this piece, and the imagery was beautifully detailed, it was like I could see everything that was happening.

    I loved the many conflicting emotions you put into this, it makes the poem very powerful., and I adore the ending...so stunning and it holds so much power.

    Amazing work on this.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Good poem...like it....you just need...erm...spacing maybe...very desriptive however, good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Honestly, some parts of this poem completely threw me off. I mean, in some lines you have great descriptions and truly dark atmosphere, and then you make some unoriginal, obvious rhyme which completely ruins whole effect.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Beautiful poem with great rhymes and the dark component. LOved the way it flows and superb work.

    tc
    Fsams