Clairvoyant Love

by Dark Savior   Jan 21, 2005


I sit here feeling sad; feeling mad
all the memories that we had

those eyes so beautiful and brown
look to them; my sorrows they did drown

we could have a conversation; without a word
our love flew higher then an eagle or a bird

sometimes i wonder where we went wrong
but it is just the same ol' song

you cheated and you seemed to love him more
now our love is locked behind his bedroom door

you didn't understand why i was at her side
my grandma meant more to me then your pride

you've moved on and so have i
you said you cried; i know it was a lie

i live in the present; the now, the here
my future?..no one knows, not even a seer

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Those eyes so beautiful and brown
    look to them; my sorrows they did drown

    ^^^Such a beautiful phrase!
    This is a very personal poem and it is really sad:(
    I hope all is well with you now, Shaun:)

    Hugs,

    Ingrid

  • 19 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    another great poem!! 5/5 again, you have some real talent in writing, keep it up.
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

  • 19 years ago

    by Holly

    I don't like the flow of your poem, the syllables are quite off. I like the feeling put into it though.

  • 19 years ago

    by UM

    Here's the mistakes I noticed...

    "our love flew higher then a eagle or a bird" then should be than and a should be an.

    "you cheated and you seemed to loved him more" loved should be love.

    "my grandma meant more to me then you pride" you should be your.

  • 19 years ago

    by UM

    This is an awesome poem...only thing I saw wrong was a couple grammatical mistakes...mail me if you want to know them, some people get offended when you point them out ya know?

    I agree with Rua Francis, that is truly mint as a quote by itself.

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